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Votemoose 12:20, 14 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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This is a seriously unbalanced article. The content is hagiographic and the style clumsy ("Pat's concern for the importance of theoretical understanding informed his interest in this journal of the history of the revolutionary movement"). Omitting mention of entryism is inexcusable. 62.31.46.253 17:48, 25 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I'd suggest that the article needs firstly rewording as some parts aren't really in a good historical order, but also referecing of some of these quotes as a basis for further development. Votemoose 00:26, 11 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

After trying to search for more material for this entry, i came across an article which the original entry was a direct copy of, i've added the link to the bottom of the page (it's the obituary by Ian Hunter). I'm going to try an reference all the relevant parts to this. Votemoose 12:20, 14 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I've now referenced this fairly thoroughly and tried to balance it, i think the neutrality notice can be removedVotemoose 09:46, 27 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]