User talk:Ssaskiw/sandbox
Feedback[edit]
Hey! Here's the feedback for your sandbox, feel free to ask if anything needs explanation or clarification.
- Could clarify the organization, as discussed in class - "Definition" instead of "Towards a Definition", explain the intent of the In practice and Key Proponents sections
- Aim for a minimum of one citation per paragraph, more as necessary - claims like "first of its kind in Canada" should be cited
- Some grammatical errors - "the role of the journalist's as", "Rosen defines public journalism "is a way"", etc
- Some formatting issues - long quotes should be formatted as blockquotes (WP:QUOTE, under "formatting"), don't include external links in article text, add some more internal links to other Wikipedia articles
- For citations, try using WP:NAMEDREFS when citations are identical (ie. same pages). Also, be sure to use "page" instead of "pages" when you're citing only a single page using the citation templates
- If you can, find additional sources to support your points
The other issue to deal with is where to put your work. You suggested that it be placed at public journalism. Do you think that the overlap with civic journalism needs to be addressed? Nikkimaria (talk) 22:11, 9 April 2012 (UTC)