Talk:Lemme See/GA1
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Reviewer: Tomica (talk · contribs) 02:18, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
- There are not disambiguation links, however reference number 7 is dead. — Tomíca(T2ME) 13:46, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
Done Removed and replaced reference.
- Infobox
- Lead
- "Lemme See" is a song by American recording artist Usher, released on RCA Records, ---> "Lemme See" is a song by American recording artist Usher, released through RCA Records, — Tomíca(T2ME) 13:53, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
Done
- The track features vocals from rapper, Rick Ross. ---> The track features rapper verses from rapper, Rick Ross. — Tomíca(T2ME) 13:53, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
I think the current wording sounds a bit better.
- It was released as a digital download on May 4, 2012, ---> It was digitally released on May 4, 2012, — Tomíca(T2ME) 13:53, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
Done
- You can add some info about the live performances in the lead.— Tomíca(T2ME) 13:53, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
Done
- Background and release
- "Lemme See" was released as a digital download on May 4, 2012 ---> Same as lead. — Tomíca(T2ME) 14:01, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
Done
- Composition and critical reception
- "Lemme See" is a mid-tempo R&B song that makes heavy use of synthesizers, ---> "Lemme See" is a mid-tempo R&B song that heavily incorporates synthesizers, — Tomíca(T2ME) 14:01, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
Done
- [15][1][16][9] ---> Bad order of references, it should be chronologically, by numbers. — Tomíca(T2ME) 14:01, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
Done
- "Lemme See" received universally positive acclaim from ---> i think it's too biased to say universally, maybe just positive acclaim? — Tomíca(T2ME) 14:01, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
Done
- Chart performance
- It was knocked off the chart the proceeding week. ---> Sourced it please. — Tomíca(T2ME) 14:06, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
Done
- and is currently charted at number 71. ---> This needs clarifying. — Tomíca(T2ME) 14:06, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
Done Removed.
- Currently, "Lemme See" is charted at number twelve on the latter chart. ---> Same as above. — Tomíca(T2ME) 14:06, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
Done Removed.
- Music video and live performances --->
- Track listing
Cool
- Charts
- Release history
- References
Done
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- Ref 14. Publisher should be in brackets or {{cite news}} — Tomíca(T2ME) 14:27, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
Done
- Ref 16. Same as above, just the The Guardian should be work and italicize. — Tomíca(T2ME) 14:27, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
Done
Done
- I see you are not using the {{cite web}} and the one for news, if you don't use them try to format the references well. Bad example: Youssef, Sobhi. Review: Looking 4 Myself Sputnik Music. Retrieved on 2012-06-18.
Done Used Web and News template where appropriate; better formatted AllMusic ref.
Done
Done
Done Should be good now.
- External links
Thanks Tom, i'll address these issues hopefully later today. Et3rnal 16:50, 24 November 2012 (UTC)