Talk:Lemme See

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November 25, 2012Good article nomineeListed
June 5, 2014Good topic candidatePromoted
Current status: Good article

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Reviewer: Tomica (talk · contribs) 02:18, 24 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

  • There are not disambiguation links, however reference number 7 is dead. — Tomíca(T2ME) 13:46, 24 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

 Done Removed and replaced reference.

Infobox
Lead
  • "Lemme See" is a song by American recording artist Usher, released on RCA Records, ---> "Lemme See" is a song by American recording artist Usher, released through RCA Records, — Tomíca(T2ME) 13:53, 24 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

 Done

  • The track features vocals from rapper, Rick Ross. ---> The track features rapper verses from rapper, Rick Ross. — Tomíca(T2ME) 13:53, 24 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I think the current wording sounds a bit better.

  • It was released as a digital download on May 4, 2012, ---> It was digitally released on May 4, 2012, — Tomíca(T2ME) 13:53, 24 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

 Done

  • You can add some info about the live performances in the lead.— Tomíca(T2ME) 13:53, 24 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

 Done

Background and release
  • "Lemme See" was released as a digital download on May 4, 2012 ---> Same as lead. — Tomíca(T2ME) 14:01, 24 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

 Done

Composition and critical reception
  • "Lemme See" is a mid-tempo R&B song that makes heavy use of synthesizers, ---> "Lemme See" is a mid-tempo R&B song that heavily incorporates synthesizers, — Tomíca(T2ME) 14:01, 24 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

 Done

  • [15][1][16][9] ---> Bad order of references, it should be chronologically, by numbers. — Tomíca(T2ME) 14:01, 24 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

 Done

  • "Lemme See" received universally positive acclaim from ---> i think it's too biased to say universally, maybe just positive acclaim? — Tomíca(T2ME) 14:01, 24 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

 Done

Chart performance
  • It was knocked off the chart the proceeding week. ---> Sourced it please. — Tomíca(T2ME) 14:06, 24 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

 Done

  • and is currently charted at number 71. ---> This needs clarifying. — Tomíca(T2ME) 14:06, 24 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

 Done Removed.

  • Currently, "Lemme See" is charted at number twelve on the latter chart. ---> Same as above. — Tomíca(T2ME) 14:06, 24 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

 Done Removed.

Music video and live performances --->
Track listing

Cool

Charts
Release history
References

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  • Ref 16. Same as above, just the The Guardian should be work and italicize. — Tomíca(T2ME) 14:27, 24 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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  • I see you are not using the {{cite web}} and the one for news, if you don't use them try to format the references well. Bad example: Youssef, Sobhi. Review: Looking 4 Myself Sputnik Music. Retrieved on 2012-06-18.

 Done Used Web and News template where appropriate; better formatted AllMusic ref.

  • There is inconsistency in the dates and accessdates. — Tomíca(T2ME) 14:27, 24 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

 Done

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  • All in all the references are mess. Work on them! — Tomíca(T2ME) 14:27, 24 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

 Done Should be good now.

External links

Thanks Tom, i'll address these issues hopefully later today. Et3rnal 16:50, 24 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Take your time buddy. — Tomíca(T2ME) 17:15, 24 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
I think I've addressed all the issues. Et3rnal 02:14, 25 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Orphaned references in Lemme See[edit]

I check pages listed in Category:Pages with incorrect ref formatting to try to fix reference errors. One of the things I do is look for content for orphaned references in wikilinked articles. I have found content for some of Lemme See's orphans, the problem is that I found more than one version. I can't determine which (if any) is correct for this article, so I am asking for a sentient editor to look it over and copy the correct ref content into this article.

Reference named "UKR&B":

  • From Spotlight (Gucci Mane song): "Top 40 R&B Singles Archive: 20th February 2010". The Official Charts Company. Retrieved 29 August 2011.
  • From S&M (song): "S&M" spent five consecutive weeks at number 1 on the UK R&B Singles Chart:

I apologize if any of the above are effectively identical; I am just a simple computer program, so I can't determine whether minor differences are significant or not. AnomieBOT⚡ 10:22, 20 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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