"In the episode," - In the episode or this episode?
Changed to "this". GRAPPLEX 03:27, 5 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"the prior two episodes." - The prior or the previous?
They're both the immediately preceding ones so I wasn't aware there was a difference in this case; which would be preferable? GRAPPLEX 03:27, 5 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"conflation of violence and sexuality" - Does this really need to be direct quotes?
It was five words which I believe is considered the boundary between paraphrasing and copyvio; I've reworded it and removed it from quotes instead. It's now "violent sexuality". GRAPPLEX 03:27, 5 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
And yeah, Den of Geek needs its reliability established.
As before, I'm comfortable removing this material if it proves not to be noteworthy enough. GRAPPLEX 03:27, 5 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
I've done a minor copyedit, mostly non-breaking spaces. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 02:58, 5 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks again for helping out. GRAPPLEX 03:27, 5 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
