Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/Kingdom Hearts
Kingdom Hearts[edit]
Kingdom Hearts recently was re-evaluated as a B-Class from a Start-Class article. Since then several other sections have been rewritten and additional content and references have been added as well. Myself and other editors would like to see Kingdom Hearts make it to Good Article Status and eventually Featured Article status. Any comments and ideas would be appreciated. (Guyinblack25 14:39, 22 May 2007 (UTC))
- Fair use rationales for images, a few more sentences/another paragraph is possible for the development section and a once over for prose should make this a very strong contender for FA :) Judgesurreal777 07:00, 25 May 2007 (UTC)
- Fair use rationales for images have been added. Extra content has been added to the development section and more is being sought after. I will go over the prose and try to find someone else to as well. Do you have any other recommendations, and do you think it is at Good Article level? Thank you for the input. (Guyinblack25 17:28, 25 May 2007 (UTC))
- Once you put in place a bit more development info, it should be ready for FA, it is totally ready for GA. Judgesurreal777 21:59, 25 May 2007 (UTC)
- Oh, and there is one citation needed :) Judgesurreal777 22:00, 25 May 2007 (UTC)
- Once you put in place a bit more development info, it should be ready for FA, it is totally ready for GA. Judgesurreal777 21:59, 25 May 2007 (UTC)
- Fair use rationales for images have been added. Extra content has been added to the development section and more is being sought after. I will go over the prose and try to find someone else to as well. Do you have any other recommendations, and do you think it is at Good Article level? Thank you for the input. (Guyinblack25 17:28, 25 May 2007 (UTC))
- "Kingdom Hearts is heavily influenced by its parent franchise, Final Fantasy, and carries many gameplay elements over into its own action-based, hack-and-slash system." - The words "heavy" and "many" are going to need removing or sourcing. I'll read through the whole thing tomorrow, that was just a snippet :) --Teggles 07:46, 31 May 2007 (UTC)
Thank you for the suggestions. We've done copy edits on the article and have tried expanding the "Development" section as best we can. Unfortunately we've been having trouble finding information to expand the "Development" section further. Any ideas on where we can look to find the information? (Guyinblack25 16:49, 11 June 2007 (UTC))
- Sources can be found in various reliable sources, such as the IGN website, the Square Enix website, the Gamestop website and so on. Sjones23 12:54, 15 June 2007 (UTC)
- I've looked through the News and Press Release articles on IGN and GameSpot, but information on the actual development of the first game is sparse. Square Enix's website only directs you to the official website, and their press releases only go back to 2003. I've run across some tidbits while looking for the development info of the sequel, and have added the new information. Hopefully the content is enough, because I keep running into walls. Any other suggestions on where to find development info and/or to improve the article? (Guyinblack25 16:05, 15 June 2007 (UTC))
- Well, I've added a little bit more to the "Development" section and a few other bits here and there and have done more copy editing. Do you guys think it's ready for Featured Article, or is there more needed? (Guyinblack25 15:37, 20 June 2007 (UTC))
- I think it is ready. I've nominated it at Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Kingdom Hearts. Greg Jones II 17:04, 4 July 2007 (UTC)
- Well, I've added a little bit more to the "Development" section and a few other bits here and there and have done more copy editing. Do you guys think it's ready for Featured Article, or is there more needed? (Guyinblack25 15:37, 20 June 2007 (UTC))
- I've looked through the News and Press Release articles on IGN and GameSpot, but information on the actual development of the first game is sparse. Square Enix's website only directs you to the official website, and their press releases only go back to 2003. I've run across some tidbits while looking for the development info of the sequel, and have added the new information. Hopefully the content is enough, because I keep running into walls. Any other suggestions on where to find development info and/or to improve the article? (Guyinblack25 16:05, 15 June 2007 (UTC))