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Neo-Renaissance[edit]

Good article which the Wikipedia:WikiProject Architecture would like to see improved.--Mcginnly 23:51, 16 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

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This has been fixed thanks to bobblewik's tool. Joelito (talk) 03:26, 17 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
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Done. Joelito (talk) 03:26, 17 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Joelito (talk) 03:26, 17 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
  • There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
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  • Thanks, Andy t 00:59, 17 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
  • Could I just point out, this is in fact one of a series of pages on 19th century revival styles which like this page are still under construction. A collaboration between Ghirla and myself. This is still being researched, and is a long way from completion. Hence PR, or indeed any other form of review is very premature! Giano | talk 10:01, 17 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
  • I second Giano here. Please give us some time. --Ghirla -трёп- 10:15, 17 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
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