Wikipedia:Peer review/Manhattan/archive1

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Manhattan[edit]

After much work and effort, this article has been brought up to Good article status. Much additional text has been added and ample sources have been included to document the material. I would like to improve the article further to consider featured article status, and I am looking for any and all input on ways to improve the article to pass muster. Alansohn 01:31, 2 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Great panorama pic! I can't quite put my finger on it, but parts of this article give me a feeling that the author's native language is not English. Some of the sentences seem kind of "unnatural"... Could be just me I suppose. Matt 00:12, 4 May 2007 (UTC)