Wikipedia:Peer review/Kingdom Hearts (series)/archive1

Kingdom Hearts (series)[edit]

All of the games (KH, CoM and KHII) have reached featured status. If there are any suggestions in making this an FA, it will be appreciated very much. Greg Jones II 18:50, 14 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Quick comment As someone unfamiliar with the content of Kingdom Hearts, I had trouble getting a clear version of what the games were about after having read the lead. In particular, the first two sentences of the second paragraph were confusing, even after rereading them a few times. What exactly are "alternate" Disney universes and "alternate versions" of characters? 69.202.41.119 21:46, 14 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

We'll see about rewriting the lead paragraphs, to include more info and to improve readability. Any other ideas? (Guyinblack25 ^talk 22:49, 23 August 2007 (UTC))[reply]

I think we need more people involved in this review. Greg Jones II 16:00, 27 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Also, wikilinking needs to be fixed. Greg Jones II 16:00, 27 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, Greg Jones II 16:03, 27 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]
- Oh, wait, I am getting this peerreview tool set up. Sorry... Greg Jones II 16:07, 27 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  - Please, can anyone help me out? I will get this peerreview thing to the redlinked section. Thanks. Greg Jones II 16:10, 27 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]
    - Never mind. Greg Jones II 16:13, 27 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]
- Added the auto-PR suggestions there. APR _t 17:25, 31 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Are there any more ideas? That would be very much appreciated. I will request a semi-automated peer review for this article at Wikipedia:Peer review/Automated. Greg Jones II 16:48, 27 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]