Wikipedia:Peer review/Kingda Ka/archive1
Kingda Ka[edit]
As a part of an improvement drive over at WikiProject Roller Coasters, I'd quite like to get this article up to scratch. I'm already aware that there's a severe lack of references and I'm already working on getting them in. What I think the article really needs is a review from the POV of a non-enthusiast, with the intention of getting this up to GA. Many thanks! Seaserpent85Talk 18:16, 22 August 2007 (UTC)
- Good article. Here are a few minor suggestions:
- Put the aviation concern into its own paragraph. Did this affect the design process or cause a delay in opening the ride?
- The line "passes by the lockers." What lockers? Is this significant?
- The braking fins should be discussed in the ride overview, before the section on the malfunction.
- Is a picture available showing riders in the car, restraints in place?
- Is a picture available showing a car in action on the track?
VisitorTalk 08:09, 6 September 2007 (UTC)