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Bart Simpson[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because I'm hoping to have the page FAC ready soon. I'll probably submit a FAC by Friday, so this won't be open long.

Thanks, Scorpion ⁰⁴²² 04:04, 2 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

There is some occasional overlinking, especially in the merchandising section. Also, I have troubles linking "do not age" to immortality. Also, my personal preference is to list 'references' that use the show's episodes, separate from the 'true' references. Consider using the <ref group=note> trick. Nergaal (talk) 04:33, 3 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments With just a quick scan I can see a real lack of info. Just examples:

Nothing about his character development
No mention of him being a fan of Radioactive Man
Don't quite understand the Role in The Simpsons section, it seems more to be about his age, why is so short? why is it the lead section?
"Reception and cultural influence" section should be split. It's not clear what's Reception and what's cultural influence.
"Bart is sometimes willing to go through a series of humiliations if it means pleasing his mom." example?
"While Bart has often hurt Lisa" example?
Has this article has a copy edit.If not get someone to do one before you even consider making it a FAC.

BUC (talk) 14:29, 10 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]