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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was not promoted by Scorpion0422 19:36, 20 February 2009 [1].

List of Jericho episodes[edit]

I'll fix these errors, but I am going to withdraw this now until my other two are further down the list, to give you guys some additional breathing room. NuclearWarfare (Talk) 17:46, 20 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Nominator(s): NuclearWarfare (Talk)''
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What would you do if 23 nuclear bombs went off in the United States?

Does this meet the Featured List criteria? NuclearWarfare (Talk) 03:35, 19 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

You have three FLCs going on, all of which have been nominated in the past two or three days. Please let up a bit. Dabomb87 (talk) 04:06, 19 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I asked Scorpion, and he said that it was OK to nominate these as long as I didn't break Gary King's record of 18. I am in no rush; please feel free to review other articles, even if this FLC gets close to the bottom of the list. NuclearWarfare (Talk) 04:19, 19 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Don't worry, I will ;) It would be nice if you did too. Dabomb87 (talk) 05:21, 19 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
You know, that's probably a good idea. I've asked a lot from you guys recently, and I have only really done one small check for Ironholds. I'll do a couple. NuclearWarfare (Talk) 05:27, 19 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Truco (talk · contribs)

General
  • Like Dabomb stated its best to hold off on the nominations due to the backlog and lack of reviewers.
Lead
  • Jericho is set in the fictional town of Jericho, Kansas and follows the town's struggle to survive in the aftermath of nuclear attacks on 23 major U.S. cities. -- Comma after Kansas.
  • The first season begins almost immediately with the detonation of the bombs, and initially focuses on the physical effects of the bombs. Later on, the focus shifts to a battle against a neighboring town.[1] The second season begins with the arrival of the new government, and focuses on the transformation of Jericho into a police state, as well as Jake Green (Skeet Ulrich) and Robert Hawkins' (Lennie James) attempt to expose the masterminds of the attack. -- A lot of repetition of the word focus, can a synonym be used at least once?
  • (Opt.) Some of these types of list state the timeslot and day of the week it aired, which would be located in a sentence like Jericho originally aired from September 20, 2006 to March 25, 2008 on CBS in the United States.
  • After a large fan outcry[5] CBS agreed to order seven additional trial[6] episodes for a second season, which began airing on February 12 and ended on March 25, 2008. -- (1)Be consistent with the date formatting, the previous sentence stated the date as February 21, 2007 to May 9, 2007 [which has the year in both dates, unlike this one] (2)Comma after outcry
  • Jericho went on hiatus after the "fall finale" episode of November 29, 2006 and returned with a recap episode on February 14, 2007. -- Comma before and
Seasons
  • Remove the colors from the column headings or use lighter colors, the ones in place now are too distracting.
  • There are a lot of redlinks, consider creating some stubs or not link any at all.
Footnotes
  • Remove the full stop, the statement there is not a complete sentence.
References
  • There is a problem with the bolding in some of the references. This can be resolved by not listing Jericho as the work because IGN publisher their information and it is their work (as in writing it). Some, like Ref 5, I'm not sure; there could be a bolding issue in that citation.--TRUCO 23:33, 19 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

The nominator has withdrawn this candidate.[2] Please leave {{FLC}} on the articles talk page until the bot processes it. Rambo's Revenge (talk) 19:35, 20 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

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