Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/The Concert in Central Park/archive2

The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was not promoted by GrahamColm 17:32, 2 August 2012 [1].

The Concert in Central Park[edit]

Nominator(s): GoP _T ^C _N 11:47, 23 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

The first nomination failed due to prose issues. This article was then copyedited by User:Dementia13, and other users assisted. I hope the article now meets the criteria. Regards.GoP _T ^C _N 11:47, 23 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Note: This is a WikiCup nomination. The following nominators are WikiCup participants: GreatOrangePumpkin. To the nominator: if you do not intend to submit this article at the WikiCup, feel free to remove this notice. UcuchaBot (talk) 00:01, 24 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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Part of technical review as part of WP:QAI's efforts to improve technical aspects of our wiki's quality articles....

Refs 5, 10, 20, 24, and 44, all use et seq but some say p and the others pp. PP is prob best here.

Done

The publisher name in some refs starts with a uppercase letter and in other lc.

I don't understand why the website name is part of the title in many refs, and in other refs it's missing, another inconsistency

SFN/HARV notes are not required by FAC but are well worth considering; it makes reading the article in edit mode much easier, among other things

FN 71 is missing a retrieve date PumpkinSky talk 01:16, 24 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Done--GoP _T ^C _N 18:18, 24 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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