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DYK for Thomas Ellison

The DYK project (nominate) 00:02, 10 March 2013 (UTC)

Carte Goodwin

Shudde, I disagree with your decision for immediately fail Carte Goodwin, and insist you change your decision and actually allow me some time to improve it based on your suggestions. It meets no quick-fail criteria, and it deserves an appropriate amount of time to be improved like any other GA candidate. Grammarxxx ^{(What'd I do this time?)} 04:46, 24 March 2013 (UTC)

Also in your suggestions, you say "You never say who appointed Goodwin to the Senate seat? I'm assuming it was Manchin." In the very first sentence of the Senate section "On July 16, 2010, Manchin appointed Goodwin to the U.S. Senate seat," so I don't mean to be rude, but I don't feel you spent an appropriate amount of time on this article. Grammarxxx ^{(What'd I do this time?)} 04:53, 24 March 2013 (UTC)

I spent a lot of time on the article — the fact that there is an error there does not prove otherwise. I read the article before deciding to review it, and then another 30 minutes going through the article once I decided to give it a review. It was about 500-600 words of prose (excluding the lead); which just doesn't take as long to review as an article of greater length. The article did not meet the quick-fail criteria, but that doesn't mean it meets the WP:GACR! Also please keep in mind that WP:GAN is not a substitute for a peer review; it is not about submitting an article for review that clearly doesn't meet the criteria, having someone then spend the time saying why, and then giving the submitter time to bring the article up to standard. I don't think the article was broad enough (among other less significant problems), and that sufficient expansion of the article is not practical in seven days. Remember, that once it has been expanded, I have to review it again like a new review — it's not a trivial change to the article we're discussing here. You're welcome to submit the article to WP:GAR, but unless you think the article is actually broad in coverage, you may be better to spend your time expanding it, fix the problems I mentioned, then resubmit it to WP:GAN. - Shudde ^talk 05:15, 24 March 2013 (UTC)

While the article may not be the longest, I feel you're overestimating his political career. Even so, I can expand this article and address every comment you made well within 7 days. As for GACR, it does meet 3b, so I believe it at least deserves a review rather than a rubber-stamp fail. And although you're correct GAN isn't a place to submit non-quality articles, I disagree with you that this one is one of them. Grammarxxx ^{(What'd I do this time?)} 00:13, 25 March 2013 (UTC)

I am repeating myself here, but I did a full review — please stop saying otherwise; it was not a "rubber-stamp fail". It was reviewed fully and I believe it fails criteria 3, and that the problems are substantial, not a case of the article being 90% there and only having a few things to fix. To quote Wikipedia:Reviewing good articles — "If the problems are substantial or extensive, the nomination can be failed. In the latter case, the editors at the article should be invited to renominate the article once it has been improved". This is what I have done. Like I said above, if you believe the article meets the Good Article Criteria, then take it to WP:GAR. That is the mechanism that the community has in place to resolve a disagreement like this. - Shudde ^talk 08:10, 25 March 2013 (UTC)

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Some stroopwafels for you!

Thanks for the review at Ernesto Perez Balladares. These are, um, Panamanian stroopwafels. Or something. But the point is, thanks! -- Khazar2 (talk) 00:36, 30 March 2013 (UTC)

Cheers! Reviews can be quite rewarding when the nominator and reviewer see the process as collaborative, which it should be, rather than adversarial. Congratulations again. - Shudde ^talk 00:49, 30 March 2013 (UTC)

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DYK for Patrick Keogh

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Page numbers and DOI added per your recommendations. Yunshui 雲‍水 09:53, 8 April 2013 (UTC)

(Sorry if that came across as a "why haven't you reviewed this yet!?" demand - I only noticed the page numbers had been added (and the article expanded again) a few minutes earlier myself, and though I'd let you know just in case you hadn't seen it. I realise now that it sounded a bit petulant; not the intended effect at all, I assure you! Yunshui 雲‍水 10:11, 8 April 2013 (UTC))

Don't apologise! I had intended to check the DYK page asap, but how was anyone to know? - Shudde ^talk 10:35, 8 April 2013 (UTC)

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1888–1889 New Zealand Native football team

Hope you find the cites acceptable, the Aukland Star report probably gives us enough to write up a report on the match, a game which historically seems to be clouded in mystery. Cheers FruitMonkey (talk) 12:50, 13 April 2013 (UTC)

DYK for Tom French Cup

Casliber (talk · contribs) 00:03, 14 April 2013 (UTC)

1920 Rock Island season

Hey, I'm sorry I haven't been active. My uncle passed away earlier in the week, so I took a break from editing. I can restart the process now.
—Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 05:55, 14 April 2013 (UTC)

Hi. No problem, I was a couple of days away from closing it, but if you're back editing then I'll leave it on hold. Would be good if we could get it done relatively promptly. It might be a good idea to add a note to the GA review page so that any readers see that you are back. Sorry to hear about your Uncle. - Shudde ^talk 06:49, 14 April 2013 (UTC)

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List of international cricket five-wicket hauls by Abdul Qadir

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Talk:Carolina Panthers/GA1

Hey, thanks for taking this on and doing a comprehensive review. I've replied to all of your concerns and comments - most have been dealt with, but I have given a couple comments as well. Toa Nidhiki05 21:12, 28 April 2013 (UTC)

I've responded to the new comments. Toa Nidhiki05 17:30, 29 April 2013 (UTC)

Please see Talk:No worries/GA2

Please see Talk:No worries/GA2.

I respectfully ask that you please reevaluate your position here.

I've done a good deal of research on this article.

It does provide a worldview.

It is drawn from multiple different secondary sources, the majority of which are not from Australia itself, but are independent reliable secondary sources.

Thank you for your consideration in this matter,

— Cirt (talk) 17:02, 29 April 2013 (UTC)

Cool. I've read your comments and replied at the discussion page. Not sure why you are mentioning the use of secondary sources, this was never a problem, rather it was a broadness/POV issue (rather than any probs regarding RS or OR). Anyway hope you're satisfied with my response. I wasn't aware that you (the original nominator) hadn't been notified about the GAR, otherwise I would have let you know myself! - Shudde ^talk 11:02, 30 April 2013 (UTC)

Okay, thank you, — Cirt (talk) 17:11, 30 April 2013 (UTC)

"I still think it would be nice to have something in there about how common the expression is in New Zealand"

Do you know of any reliable and verifiable secondary sources that confirm this assertion? — Cirt (talk) 17:11, 30 April 2013 (UTC)

I probably should have phrased it more carefully, but what I was saying is that some statement on the terms use (ie frequency) in NZ would be nice—I believe it is common, but am happy for a statement saying otherwise, as long as there is something on how common or not the term is! As there is a reference regarding its migration to NZ, I was hoping that ref's "Cryer 2006, p. 139" or "Hoffmann 2009, pp. 119–121" may say something, even if only that the term is used 'commonly', 'frequently', 'rarely', 'occasionally' etc. Maybe [1] will help—I don't have access to it unfortunately. [2] may be useful, but it's obviously intended for international students and I'm not sure how reliable it is. Even less reliable is [3]. Anyway hope those are useful. - Shudde ^talk 09:24, 1 May 2013 (UTC)

List of Kings Island attractions FLC

I have addressed all the issues you mentioned on the review page.--Dom497 (talk) 00:42, 1 May 2013 (UTC)

I've addressed the other two issues.--Dom497 (talk) 23:22, 1 May 2013 (UTC)

Done.--Dom497 (talk) 00:30, 3 May 2013 (UTC)

You already know what I'm going to say. ;) --Dom497 (talk) 18:12, 4 May 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, I promise this will be the last message I will leave you. On the review page, you left one comment out of the "resolved comments" box. I don't know if this was an error by you or you think that it hasn't been addressed, but I did fix it as Rambling Man mentioned the same thing in his review.--Dom497 (talk) 19:26, 5 May 2013 (UTC)

I know-I left it there so it is clear I support. - Shudde ^talk 12:03, 7 May 2013 (UTC)

Ellison FAC

I wasn't sure if you had finished responding at the FAC. If you ping me when you are ready, I'll have another look. Sarastro1 (talk) 19:05, 6 May 2013 (UTC)

Changes looking good. If I get chance, I'll have another close look this week and maybe a little copy-editing myself. But I think we're getting there. Sarastro1 (talk) 18:07, 7 May 2013 (UTC)

Wikipedia:Peer review/John Neulinger/archive1

I just wanted to thank you for your excellent peer review. I'm going to try and get started on it this week. Viriditas (talk) 01:34, 8 May 2013 (UTC)

No problems. I'm glad it was helpful. - Shudde ^talk 12:15, 9 May 2013 (UTC)

It was. I'm just starting it now. Viriditas (talk) 04:06, 27 May 2013 (UTC)

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Keith Davis (rugby union)

Can you separate the article into sections please? Thanks, George Ho (talk) 18:19, 20 May 2013 (UTC)

I'm not sure why, considering the article is so short (and you were welcome to do this yourself if you thought it would improve it), but ok. - Shudde ^talk 11:13, 21 May 2013 (UTC)

Sonny Bill Williams

Hi Shudde. So i am going to add the controversies you removed into the relevant sections of SBW's playing career. Is that what you had in mind?Suid-Afrikaanse (talk) 01:23, 26 May 2013 (UTC)

Oh, i see what you have done. You added them in the Personal life section. But i think some more detail should be given like his tryst with the ironwoman - which was pretty big news.Suid-Afrikaanse (talk) 01:36, 26 May 2013 (UTC)

DYK for Keith Davis (rugby union)

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Peer review

Thanks for your useful comments here. I will address them when I have a bit of time. Cheers! JFW | T@lk 22:31, 29 May 2013 (UTC)

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1877 Wimbledon Championship GA review

Hi Shude, just a heads up to let you know that the remaining issues of the 1877 Wimbledon Championship GA review have been addressed. Again thanks for taking the time to review the article.--Wolbo (talk) 05:11, 11 June 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for completing the review of the 1877 Wimbledon Championship article and passing it for GA status (only the 10th GA article within the tennis WikiProject). I thought it was a good and thorough review and the points raised have certainly improved the article. It was fun working on it. I'm considering if it might be worthwhile to pursue it further and aim for A class status and finally FA but I'm unfamiliar with that process and unsure if the article would qualify. Any thoughts on that? Cheers, Wolbo. --Wolbo (talk) 21:25, 12 June 2013 (UTC)

Request for help with peer review

Hello- I currently have an open peer review for List of Detroit Red Wings seasons that I am hopeful you could take a look at and provide input for. Based on your review at Wikipedia:Peer review/Barend Joseph Stokvis/archive1 and your work on such pages as List of 1888–89 New Zealand Native football team matches I think you may be just the person to help me take this article to the next level. Regards, Rejectwater (talk) 16:57, 13 June 2013 (UTC)

Modification: I am hopeful you could please take a look at and provide input for. Cheers, Rejectwater (talk) 17:39, 13 June 2013 (UTC)

I'll try and find time to give it a read over this weekend. - Shudde ^talk 01:31, 15 June 2013 (UTC)