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Sports Marketing:[[1]]
I Chose this article because of my interest with Sports Marketing and the impact it has on the consumers. The only way to get to consumers would be from communicating to the audience, you can do this in so many ways. Likewise, you can use promotions, discounting, After events, like concert and other things to drive sports fans to the games and stay the full-time.
Lead
Guiding questions
1. The article in fact had an introductory article that leads to what sports marketing is and what influences it has as a whole.
2. The article struggles to lead to the big sections of the page. It talks heavily of the impact of social media and their digital platforms but fails to talk more about relationships built through marketing which I thought was interesting when I chose this article.
3. The article mentions broadcasting and also strategies to be built to have a successful plan/campaign. The article talks more about sponsorships then actual plans.
4. Overly detailed article
Lead evaluation
Content
Guiding questions
1.The article is very relevant to the content as it talks about Sports Marketing as a whole.
2. Article is not up to date.
3. I believe the input of the challenges of Sports Marketing could of been more explained. Like for instance, the article could of talked about the challenges with big market cities vs. small market cities and how they differ.
Content evaluation
Tone and Balance
Guiding questions
1. Yes, neutral article.
2. The heavily biased point of view came from the desire of sponsorships.
3. Article is under-represented in the challenges that Sports Marketing is facing especially for getting a job in that field.
4. Article persuaded in a positive way.
Tone and balance evaluation
Sources and References
Guiding questions
1. The article has references and other facts in this page and everything is backed up.
2. Sources are thorough to the point where the reader understands the basics of Sports Marketing, of course this is a vague page of sports marketing but was curious to see how in detail this went with the Sports Marketing today.
3. The most current source I seen on the article was 2015, so not really that current. 4. Yes, all the links I checked worked.
Sources and references evaluation
Organization
Guiding questions
1. The article is well-written and flows with what is being said and what is targeted.
2. The article has run on sentences and an abundant amount of grammatical error.
3. The article talked to much about examples of sports marketing than actual divisions of marketing and getting to that target audience.
Organization evaluation
Images and Media
Guiding questions
1. The article does not have really any pictures depicting sports marketing. Not even graphs or other facts, the only picture is a NASCAR mobile.
2. The picture does display communication with advertisers on NASCAR mobiles to reach out to fans to support their favorite driver and potentially favorite product or brand.
3. The pictures do adhere to Wikipedia's form.
4. The image is bright and colorful and appeals to the readers eye, but can be bigger. Just a small picture to depict Sports Marketing.
Images and media evaluation
Checking the talk page
Guiding questions
1. The people in the Talk, were discussing grammatical errors and run on sentences, which was stated earlier. Also, edits to the page that was needed.
2.It is on a couple Wikiprokects like, "Marketing and Advertising articles" and also just "Sports articles".
3. There really is not any opinions or differences in the Talk. That is because this is a straight forward article about Sports Marketing and how it works and impacts us in everyday life.
Talk page evaluation
'Overall impressions
Guiding questions'
1. The overall status of this article is heavy oriented with definitions and examples of Sports Marketing and how it works. It goes into little detail about communication and how important it is to distribute a message across to get the fans react in a way to bring them in to be loyal. Pushing those promotions, and season ticket packages and jersey sales.
2. Strengths would be definitely describing Sports Marketing to people who never heard how it works. Other places it was strong was when the article talked about sports fan and the influence they have on the markets.
3. The article can talk more about the challenges of Sports Marketing and also the history of marketing and how big it has become throughout the years and sports. Also, has too many grammatical errors and that can trip up a reader.
4. The article is developed but needs to be tweaked just a bit to make this article what it needs to be to just be a simple article about Sports Marketing.
Overall evaluation
DomRosati89 (talk) 22:18, 27 January 2020 (UTC)DomRosati89