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'Method' is better than 'methodology' Comtebenoit (talk) 04:37, 4 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

@Arctickinkajou and Hurlej: - This is looking excellent, well done! I have added some tags to draw your attention to some areas for improvement. Comtebenoit (talk) 21:01, 13 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

@Arctickinkajou and Hurlej: -

I don't think you can that that this evidence 'suggest[s] a society that values warriors', that's going too far. VIolence happened, we can be sure of that, but what is the evidence that they really valued it?
mention of the two layer hypothesis and gene flow is too brief to make sense of, either delete or expand
This further reading item does not seem relevant: Janssens, K. H. (Ed.). (2013). Modern Methods for Analysing Archaeological and Historical Glass. Wiley. Replace it

Comtebenoit (talk) 18:22, 16 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]