User:Chris199012

Who I am

I am a first-year college student from Japan. I'm interested in economics, mathematics, literature, history, etc.

Wikipedia Article Peer Review

New York City water supply system One of the first things I noticed about your article is that it has a "history section" but does not have any information on the history. I think that subheading should be deleted or information should be put there. The second sentence starts with "with Croton, Catskill and Delaware", honestly I don't know what Croton and Catskill are, a hyperlink would be helpful here. I do like that the article states that New York's water system is one of the most expensive in the world. I think that the lead could have a lot more basic information about the water system than it currently presents. The article does appear to have reliable sources. Good job- Savanna