Template:Did you know nominations/Modena Park 2017

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:06, 11 September 2017 (UTC)

Modena Park 2017[edit]

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... that rock singer Vasco Rossi broke the world record for the largest ticketed concert at Modena Park 2017? Source: Italy to host biggest ticketed concert ever: 220,000 tickets sold for Italian star Vasco Rossi Concert
- ALT1:~~... that Modena Park 2017 was the world largest ticketed concert ever?~~

Comment: I translated the article today. Since I'm not english mother-tongue speaking, I ask your help to review the article. Thank you.

Created by Holapaco77 (talk). Self-nominated at 21:18, 10 July 2017 (UTC).

New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. QPQ done.CrossTemple Jay 15:00, 12 July 2017 (UTC)

The first hook is hooky, but Vasco Rossi is not eligible for DYK because it is not new or a 5x expansion, so I took out the bold formatting. Meanwhile, the article has been tagged for cleanup. You can ask for copyediting help at WP:COPYEDITORS. Yoninah (talk) 19:28, 25 July 2017 (UTC)

@Yoninah: thank you for your review. It's written that the GOCE is not for Cleanup, so I asked to WP:CLEAN. --Holapaco77 (talk) 06:07, 26 July 2017 (UTC)

@Holapaco77: the article needs a good copyedit for English grammar, not cleanup. Yoninah (talk) 06:09, 26 July 2017 (UTC)

@Yoninah: The article has been corrected by other users. Do you think is it ready now? --Holapaco77 (talk) 13:51, 13 August 2017 (UTC)

Thank you, the article reads a lot better now. I did some more copyediting and removed the tag. However, several paragraphs lack any citations at all, per Rule D2, and I added a "citation needed" tag to one other statistic. Please also fill out the references in footnotes 2 and 3 to indicate publisher and date of publication at the least. I tweaked the ALT0 hook; hook ref verified and cited inline. Yoninah (talk) 15:54, 13 August 2017 (UTC)

Holapaco77, can you fix the problems mentioned by Yoninah so that this can go forward? Thanks, --Usernameunique (talk) 00:15, 4 September 2017 (UTC)

Although it is not a DYK requirement, I have added the citation information requested by Yoninah. The "citation needed" tags are the only thing that need to be addressed. --Usernameunique (talk) 19:55, 9 September 2017 (UTC)

@Yoninah:@Usernameunique: Done CN fixed. --Holapaco77 (talk) 09:03, 10 September 2017 (UTC)

Thank you. Citations are all in place. Rest of review per Crosstemplejay. Good to go. Yoninah (talk) 21:38, 10 September 2017 (UTC)