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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:43, 6 July 2015 (UTC)

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For Honor[edit]

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Created by AdrianGamer (talk). Self-nominated at 03:19, 21 June 2015 (UTC).

  • Prose expanded fivefold, long enough (3235 characters), verifiable, neutral, no copyvio issues detected. The hook is cited and hooky. The hook is neutral, as it clearly attributes the phrase to a specific person identified as having worked on the game. The phrase itself is descriptive rather than promotional. Very nice work on this article. Good to go! Please note that as I am a relatively new reviewer, a second opinion would be helpful. ~ RobTalk 10:22, 21 June 2015 (UTC)
  • The article does not describe the game as "hack and slash", but as "melee fighting game". If you use the latter term, it needs an inline cite. Yoninah (talk) 22:53, 2 July 2015 (UTC)
  • The article previously detailed it as a hack and slash when I reviewed this, and it appears an IP editor came in and altered it a few days back. There are other edits that prevent an undo, so the IP editors changes will need to be manually looked over and partially (or fully) reverted. ~ RobTalk 04:00, 3 July 2015 (UTC)
  • Thanks. Hook ref verified and cited inline. Rest of review per User:BU Rob13. Restoring tick. Yoninah (talk) 14:58, 3 July 2015 (UTC)
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