Talk:Wilhelm Heidkamp

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Date of Death[edit]

According to both sources in the German article, Heidkamp died 1931, not 1926. (Wilhelm Heidkamp im Leverkusener Anzeiger, Wilhelm Heidkamp mit Bild im Leverkusener Anzeiger). Irmgard (talk) 07:49, 8 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I changed it --Otberg (talk) 22:45, 26 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Unfortunate phrasing[edit]

"... he would die of consequent lung disease in 1931. After his recovery, Heidkamp continued ..."

I also suggest to mention his heroism in the 1st sentence so that a casual reader wouldn't wonder why that person got dedicated a page. JB. --92.193.146.62 (talk) 02:35, 18 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]