Talk:Telenor Arena/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 15:32, 15 October 2011 (UTC)

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 15:32, 15 October 2011 (UTC)

Here are the issues I found:

• "It cost 585 million Norwegian krone (NOK) to built" to build
• "Stabæk players launched the idea of building a new stadium was at Fornebu, which had after the 1998 closing of Oslo Airport, Fornebu became subject to an urban redevelopment project" confusing as worded; perhaps reword to '...which became subject to an urban redevelopment project after the 1998 closing of Oslo Airport.'
• "voted to sell their properties at Forenbu" at Fornebu
• "municipality was willing to help by "maneuver in gray areas within the margins"." quote is long enough that it should be cited right after.
• "Architects were HRBT" a bit confused, as the article links to a tunnel rather than any architects.

I'll put the article on hold and pass when the issues are fixed. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 18:32, 16 October 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for taking the time to review the article: all has been fixed. In my defense, HRBT was a redlink back when I nominated the article ;) Arsenikk ^(talk) 22:31, 16 October 2011 (UTC)

Looks good now, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 16:22, 17 October 2011 (UTC)