Finally getting around to reviewing this article...should have my full review up by late tonight. Dana boomer (talk) 21:51, 20 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
Per WP:LEAD, the lead should be larger: perhaps two paragraphs? Her military career especially could stand to be fleshed out in the lead.
I think I'll leave that for MTBW, she's better at that than I am. PumpkinSkytalk 22:57, 20 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Origins, "The horse was originally named Ah Chim Hai in Korean,[6] which translates to "Morning Flame" or "Flame-in-the-Morning",[7][8] reputed to be the name of her dam," - She had the same name as her dam?
Yes, she did have her dam's name. PumpkinSkytalk 02:32, 21 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Who is the real publisher for Giaffo, Lou "Gooch's Marines"? The Google Books page says that it's Dorrance Publishing, which appears to be a self-publishing company. RoseDog Books appears to be a bookstore. If the book is self-published, what makes Giaffo a reliable source?
As that material all has other sources, I've moved that to Further Reading and cut the refs for it. PumpkinSkytalk 22:54, 20 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Military service, "When learning a new delivery route, Reckless would only need someone to lead her a few times. Afterwards she would make the trips on her own." Source?
It's in the Geer book and it's made very clear. Hopefully I can find the page number with Kindle search function. PumpkinSkytalk 03:00, 21 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
On pages 181-183 and probably a few other spots. I found it searching for the word "alone". Ref added. PumpkinSkytalk 22:49, 21 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Good catch! The source was wrong and it's fixed. I checked her commons cat and that's the only image that had that error. PumpkinSkytalk 22:50, 20 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Overall:
Pass/Fail:
Overall, looking good. A couple more comments above, but that should take care of the majority of the work to be done. Once the above are addressed, I'll take another read-through, but at this point the article is very close to GA status. Dana boomer (talk) 01:57, 21 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Redid and expanded the lede. Hope it's an improvement and we are good to go! Montanabw(talk) 23:08, 27 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
OK, I've re-read and everything looks good. Sorry for taking a few days to get back to this. Now passing to GA status. Nice work! Dana boomer (talk) 21:40, 31 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
No problem, Dana. We all have real lives. Thanks for the great review, article is much better. I love Reckless' story, I love it! PumpkinSkytalk 21:47, 31 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]