Talk:Rey Bucanero/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 19:32, 11 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Going to take on this review. Will be up tomorrow. MWright96 (talk) 19:32, 11 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

"Arturo García Ortiz was born on July 19, 1974 Mexico City, Distrito Federal" - This sentence is missing the word "in" which needs to go in between "1974" and "Mexico City"
"in ring" should have the hyphen for consistency
"all of whom inspired him to become a wrestler and had a hand in training García for his in ring career." - it would better flow as all of who inspired him to become a wrestler and trained García for his in ring career.

"Records are unclear if there was a wrestler known as "Rey Bucanero" already or if the name referred to "Pirata Morgan"?" - the words in bold should be replaced with another wrestler known as "Rey Bucanero" and remove the question mark
"He worked as "Rey Bucanero Jr." from 1991 through 1994, working primarily smaller shows in Puebla, Puebla" - reptition of the word worked/working - replace one of the two with another suitable word. Also Pubela, Pubela should be Pubela City
"The first indication that CMLL had faith in the Rey Bucanero character came in 1996 where CMLL teamed him up with Emilio Charles Jr. for the 1996 Gran Alternativa tournament," - repititon of CMLL, replace the second instance it is mentioned with the promotion

"In 1999 El Satánico reformed the group Los Infernales, recruiting Último Guerrero and Rey Bucanero," - replace the second comma with a semi-colon
"it's" - the apostrophe is not needed

"November 2. 2011" - the full stop must be replaced with a comma, and do you mean 2001?
" three time" - this needs a hyphen between the two words
"it was teased that Bucanero would break up with Guerrero but Bucanero stayed and Los Guerreros feuded with Perro Aguayo, Jr.'s Los Perros del Mal faction into 2006." - The parts highlighted in bold lettering must be unitalised
"At the end of April, he teamed with Tarzan Boy to win a double hair vs. hair match against Mr. Águila and Damián 666 in the main event of the 50. Aniversario de Arena México show." - All the text not bolded should be unitalised

"forcing REy Bucanero" - remove REy
"Bucanero and Terrible kicked Tiger out of La Fuerza TRT" - kicked out is unencycopedic language. How about Bucanero and Terrible removed Tiger out of the La Fuerza TRT squad

On hold until the nominator rectifies the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 07:47, 12 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@MWright96: - All issue addressed, all links work and come back clean on the link test. Thank you for your feedback and your review work. MPJ-DK 12:07, 12 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]
- @MPJ-DK: Article is now GA Class. Good work!. MWright96 (talk) 12:19, 12 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]