Talk:Red Balloon (2010 film)

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This page should not be speedy deleted because...[edit]

RED BALLOON is a short film that had success in 2010 and 2011. this page is not done to promote the movie but just relate the facts. A short film is not done to make money, but just being seen, and it has been done with a very low budget and an amazing team of professionals including Jean Clement Soret (Danny Boyle Colorist) as Colorist . As others short film are listed on Wikipedia, i think it's fair to keep this one too.

However, other short films are (1) hopefully not written in such a promotional tone and (2) not written by one of the people associated with the project who would benefit from additional press. Syrthiss (talk) 13:01, 14 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

it might need a rewrite, this text has not been written by me as english is not my first language, but by a producer that watched the movie. Do you want us to work on the rewrite ?--Alexis.wajsbrot (talk) 15:42, 14 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, please. At the moment, it looks like an advertisement. Peridon (talk) 15:49, 14 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

We re write it, let me know if it's OK for you, thank you very much --Alexis.wajsbrot (talk) 16:34, 14 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I've taken the speedy tag off - the other one takes about a week. If you can look at WP:RS, it will tell you the sort of references to find, to help your case. Don't worry too much about the quality of the English, we can sort that out so long as the notability is there - and it doesn't sound too much like advertising. Peridon (talk) 16:46, 14 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]