Talk:Ratchet & Clank: Up Your Arsenal/GA1
GA Reassessment[edit]
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As part of WikiProject Good Articles Sweeps, I am re-reviewing this article to ensure compliance with current good article standards. I am placing this article on hold pending improvements to the following issues:
- Lots of statements are unsourced, for example the last few lines of multiplayer and the 'Insomniac Museum' section.
- The story section is way too long, about equal to the rest of the content in the article. It requires a serious trim.
- Lots of one-sentence paragraphs, which aren't paragraphs and should be fleshed out or expanded.
- Images require more than the boilerplate fair use rationales to comply with WP:NFCC.
I am placing the article on hold for seven days; if no reasonable action is taken to address the above issues, I will delist the article. --Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs (talk) 21:40, 23 July 2009 (UTC)
- I will begin work on this momentarily. –Drilnoth (T • C • L) 21:43, 23 July 2009 (UTC)
- Could you maybe give me a few extra days? I've been busy off-wiki recently and so haven't had a ton of time. –Drilnoth (T • C • L) 13:45, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
- ←Much better. --Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs (talk) 22:35, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
- Great! I'll try to fix the other stuff in the next day or two. –Drilnoth (T • C • L) 22:51, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
- How are things coming along? --Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs (talk) 12:23, 12 August 2009 (UTC)
- Great! I'll try to fix the other stuff in the next day or two. –Drilnoth (T • C • L) 22:51, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
- It looks much better. As my concerns have been addressed I'm closing the GAR. Thanks for the effort, --Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs (talk) 16:35, 18 August 2009 (UTC)