Talk:Petter Stordalen

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Neutrality[edit]

Someone placed a "neutrality dispute" tag on the article. This was correct. The article was too positive, it was unacceptable. I did a total rewrite with a credible source. Geschichte (talk) 12:04, 14 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

This biography, and the one about Stordalen's wife Gunhild Anker Stordalen, has recently and again been largely expanded, using POV language, by the SPA EriHal, who might be a PR consultant connected to the couple. --Orland (talk) 17:40, 26 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

SPA user Jesper Jansen (talk · contribs) recently removed the tag, saying that the article "is very well sourced", as if that were the problem. I've replaced it with {{Systemic bias}}, and enplained it like this:

This biography, and the one about Stordalen's wife Gunhild Anker Stordalen, consists mainly of positive news and POV language, provided by SPA users as EriHal and Jesper Jansen, who might or might not be PR consultants connected to the couple.

I'm concerned about this glorification. If someone feel that the tag {{Systemic bias}} i wrongly used here, please feel free to replace it with {{bias}}. Bw --Orland (talk) 16:05, 29 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Sockpuppets: – I believe the following editors who contributed to this article are sockpuppets who should be investigated by an administrator with the relevant privileges: Choicehotels (a blocked editor), Entotrefir, EriHal, HanHansen1968, Jesper Jansen, Smartwool, and Sophiamadsen. Each of these has a brief and recent editing history confined mostly to a few, narrow, Nordic topics, with heavy promotional- and marketing-bloated prose used in many instances. I have cleaned out some of this egregious material in other articles. They strike me as users who ought to be blocked from editing and the narrow range of articles they are interested in watched in future for renewed biassed activity. — O'Dea (talk) 11:55, 21 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

JetSki Update 2015[edit]

Petter Stordalen always makes sportive opening of his hotels and inaugurations. Rarely accidents happen ; exception : June 6th 2015 http://www.easyvoyage.com/actualite/voyage-en-suede-un-milliardaire-s-ecrase-dans-les-escaliers-avec-son-jet-ski-48420

To be neutral, would be better to list the safe inaugurations, and the accidental one.

Magnon86 (talk) 07:05, 18 September 2016 (UTC)magnon86[reply]

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