Talk:Pattoki
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I added a couple of 'clarification' tags to the article:
- Darbar of Hazrat Syed Sakhi Baba Abbas Ali Shah at Darbar road Pattoki - I don't know what all of this is or how it fits into the history section.
- Urs of "Hazrat Abass Ali Shah" - not sure what this is either, a festival?
Some sections read like an advertisement and are probably original research, particulary the 'food street' and 'Present day Pattoki' sections. Both contain long lists of local businesses.
The entire article needs references; I've tagged it with 'ref improve'. Leschnei (talk) 02:30, 3 June 2016 (UTC)