Talk:Operation Iskra/GA1
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Reviewer: WikiCopter (♠ • ♣ • ♥ • ♦ • simple • commons • lost • cvu • onau) 04:03, 17 January 2011 (UTC)
I will review this later; don't be suprised if I'm unusually (or usually) exacting, because I will assume that you are planning to go to FAC later. I think I will have fun reviewing this article. WikiCopter (♠ • ♣ • ♥ • ♦ • simple • commons • lost • cvu • onau) 04:03, 17 January 2011 (UTC)
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File:Iskra german defences.JPG needs a NFUR or it has to be taken off the article, the license is not correct. WikiCopter (♠ • ♣ • ♥ • ♦ • simple • commons • lost • cvu • onau) 04:10, 17 January 2011 (UTC)Does PD Ukraine not apply to this image? It was taken before 1951. I am not the expert on licenses, I am not even sure I put the right licenses on the maps I made.Sorry, it works. Blame my stupidity.
- At 18:00 the sappers constructed bridges near Mar'ino to allow second echelon troops to advance.. "Sappers"? WikiCopter (♠ • ♣ • ♥ • ♦ • simple • commons • lost • cvu • onau) 04:26, 17 January 2011 (UTC)
- In the references, Isayev = Киселев, right? If so, use the Cyrillic for both. WikiCopter (♠ • ♣ • ♥ • ♦ • simple • commons • lost • cvu • onau) 04:34, 17 January 2011 (UTC)
- Lede needs a tad of expansion, I suggest that you expand the second para (it's only one paragraph right now). WikiCopter (♠ • ♣ • ♥ • ♦ • simple • commons • lost • cvu • onau) 17:06, 26 January 2011 (UTC)
Passed, good work. WikiCopter (♠ • ♣ • ♥ • ♦ • simple • commons • lost • cvu • onau) 23:42, 26 January 2011 (UTC)