Talk:Mohammed bin Salman
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Naming convention
Why is he being referred to as "bin Salman". "Salman" is his father's name in Arabic naming conventions. "Bin Salman" is not his surname, "Bin" simply means "son of..."
Can it be edited to just "Mohammed"?
Fallacious, Low-Quality Article
Reading this article, I get the impression that it is written by activists instead of actual writers.
Bin Salman rules an authoritarian regime, there are no democratic institutions in Saudi Arabia, and elements of repression are still evident. Human rights activists, women's rights activists, journalists, former insiders, and dissidents are systematically repressed through tactics including torture, jailing, and killings, and bin Salman is said to use a group of assassins known as the Tiger Squad to carry out extrajudicial killings.
The article uses a guilt-by-association tactic. It mostly talks about what Saudi Arabia is like instead of what the Prince is like. This would have been better organized in the Saudi Arabia article instead, unless the article has definitive evidence that widespread systematic repression is a policy of the Prince, and not the ruling monarch. What's funny is that this kind of language used is not as present in King Salman's article, despite his status as the supreme ruler.
It also pushes a claim that he is personally linked to a group of assassins, which would be fine if it weren't in the top paragraph of the article where facts are to be expected, not allegations.
There is also a conflict of interest where there are parts in the article where it explicitly describes the Prince as populist and economically and socially liberal and that he introduced liberal reforms to his country, while in other parts some editors wrote allegations associating this man to widespread repression in Saudi Arabia which is the exact opposite of what was just described.
This article needs some serious reforms if Wikipedia wants to present itself in an objective manner. Bryanscion (talk) 17:15, 26 October 2021 (UTC)
- Agreed. I find there's an effort to wedge whatever negative political content about Saudi Arabia we can think of in this article and as a result we now have a fallacious article. The "controversy" section, which is mainly based on recent geopolitical events, is literally larger than the rest of the article. Certainly fails WP:BLP and WP:NPOV in my opinion. Gorebath (talk) 04:33, 25 February 2022 (UTC)
- @Bryanscion: The idea is that the ruler sets the climate of the country that he rules, and if X conditions are in the country, those conditions would be attributable to him. Now there is a way to deal with this "guilt-by-association tactic": if published, reliable sources link the conditions to MBS himself, then cite the journalists who link them and cite their linkages and justifications for how this has to do with MBS himself. WhisperToMe (talk) 04:24, 30 March 2022 (UTC)
- I'm not going to try to determine the motives of editors and don't think there are "activist" editors, but I agree that this article should focus on what MbS does, rather than a general overview of the SA regime. Also, the lede text seems overly POV pushing, rather than just trying to give an overview. Ashmoo (talk) 13:38, 21 September 2023 (UTC)
Neutrality of Article
The first thing you’re greeted with seems to be a vent off by what I’d assume to be the “western narration” of Mohammed bin Salman. Instead of mentioning significant economic and political reforms, the article rather pushes for conspiracy theories regarding the Khashojji killing, and “feminist torture”. Referring to the Saudi-Houthi conflict as the “Saudi bombing campaign” and how Saudi Arabia isn’t democratic. All these claims being citation-free is the cherry on top. 5.41.252.229 (talk) 02:38, 24 August 2022 (UTC)
- The "western narration" and "conspiracy theories" you're referring to happen to be well supported by high quality reliable sources in the article itself. They're not "citation-free" -- the lead conforms to WP:LEADCITE. Sure, if enough editors insist, we can repeat the relevant citations in the lead. But it's unlikely. Nomoskedasticity (talk) 04:04, 24 August 2022 (UTC)
- By all means, add sourced text for anything that you think is missing from the article. (Although SA not being democratic is not a controversial claim, and is well sources. So I don't think you will succeed in getting that removed from the article). Ashmoo (talk) 13:40, 21 September 2023 (UTC)
@Nomoskedasticity: I ask for non western citations if this isn’t nothing but a western narration. All of these claims have been equally challenged and refuted, effectively making them conflictual. SwairIsRight (talk) 04:16, 24 August 2022 (UTC)
Verifiability in the personal life section
I see this long paragraph in the Personal life section. It seems to suffer from a lack of WP:Verifiability to me. Since it is a back and forth both ways, I feel like the whole paragraph should just be removed. WP articles should focus on verifiable claims and not engage in debates. Especially when it is about such a trivial topic of whether he owns a specific painting or not (however expensive). Please respond here if you object to the removal).Ashmoo (talk) 13:42, 21 September 2023 (UTC)
- In December 2017, a number of sources reported that Mohammed, using his close associate Prince Badr bin Abdullah bin Mohammed Al Farhan as an intermediary, had bought Salvator Mundi by Leonardo da Vinci; the sale in November at $450.3 million set a new record price for a work of art.[304][305][306][307] This report has been denied by the auctioneer Christie's, the Saudi Arabian embassy,[308] and the UAE government, which has announced that it is the actual owner of the painting.[309] The exact current location of the painting is unknown,[310][311] as it has not been seen publicly since the auction. However, it has been suggested that Mohammed's yacht Serene houses Salvator Mundi.[312]
- @Ashmoo: Just to add to this, there is conflicting information in the Personal life section regarding MBS's net worth. ISON (talk) 05:24, 21 November 2023 (UTC)
In 2018, he was ranked by Forbes as the eighth most powerful person in the world,[308] with a personal wealth of at least $25 billion.[309]
- Later in the Personal life section:
In 2018, Mohammed's personal net worth was estimated at US$3.0 billion.[324]
Lead too long
I came to this page having read the Neom article. I can see there are competing views about the subject; I have no strong opinion either way. I simply note that the lead is very long and the content after the second paragraph would seem better suited to the main body. If there are no comments here, I will edit in due course. All the best, Emmentalist (talk) 22:30, 30 December 2023 (UTC)
Some edits
Following my comment above, and having waited for other comments, I have started editing this article. I have edited only the lead so far. I have made little edits and one bigger one in order to strike a balance between ease of reading and the avoidance of it becoming too cumbersome. I've made a few grammar and style changes, and been quite bold with some of the content. I've removed relevant content which is included in the main body and left some indicative comment in the lead. I intend to use a little of the content I've removed in the main body in my next edits. Can I ask other editors to be parsimonious with each individual edit and to discuss here too? The subject of this article is potentially contentious I appreciate how important it is to reach conclusions around edits on the basis of constructive consensus. All the best, Emmentalist (talk) 11:28, 21 January 2024 (UTC)
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