Talk:Jack Body

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His music covers most genres, including solo and chamber music, orchestral music, music-theatre, music for dance and film as well as electroacoustic music.... A fascination with the music and cultures of Asia, particularly Indonesia, has been a strong influence on his music.

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Body's music covers several genres, including solo and chamber music, orchestral music, music-theatre, music for dance and film as well as electroacoustic music. A fascination with the music and cultures of Asia, particularly Indonesia, has been a strong influence on his music.

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