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Move undone[edit]

Checkthe moved the page to "Holyland affair" [1]. I reverted back to "Holyland Case".

An "affair" is too much an unspecific term, and already in the lede the word "scandal" was used (now undone): another imprecise word. While here we have a legal case as a major issue, resulting in high-profile politicials being sentenced. So the word "case" tells more. So this is why I prefer the reinstalled title. (I am not sure if "Case" should be capitalised). Unless I misunderstand it, I do not agree with the editsummary.

However, there could be a better title. To ponder: it could be named for the building complex, and have the "case" tied into it completely. That would be like Holyland (Jerusalem buildings) or Holyland Park (there are various names for the site around, btw). -DePiep (talk) 09:15, 30 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]