Talk:Gheluvelt Plateau actions, July–August 1917

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The bulk of the article is finished but the details of some operations are unfinished so it's to early for an assessment. Keith-264 (talk) 13:54, 23 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Put in for a B class Keith-264 (talk) 14:19, 31 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

wow. First sentence, though--perhaps should say troops of United Kingdom and Germany? Since there were troops from all over UK. auntieruth (talk) 18:59, 31 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

If you insist but British is a synonym, I think UK is an American usage. Keith-264 (talk) 19:28, 31 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Is that better? I've simplified the lead and cut out verbiage but I need to do more on the German side of events and improve the balance of the history of the history of the battle in the Analysis section. It's awkward because description in the main sources contradicts much of their explanation. Keith-264 (talk) 22:43, 31 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Trimmed lead.Keith-264 (talk) 19:20, 1 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and casualties sections[edit]

Incomplete, need to integrate Sheldon and Der Weltkrieg data.Keith-264 (talk) 09:12, 2 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]