Talk:G.I. Joe: Retaliation/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Rusted AutoParts 14:36, 22 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I will review this. Rusted AutoParts 14:36, 22 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

The lead section should have a bit more detail in it. Cast, production highlights, expanded detail on critical reception.

I reorganized the intro, but I'm not sure what specifically needs to be added. Fortdj33 (talk) 21:39, 28 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

A bit of info from each section. Mention the new cast joining as well as returning cast in a way that doesn't sound like its just listing off. See Star Trek Into Darkness lead section as an example. Rusted AutoParts 21:50, 28 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I expanded the cast and plot information in the lede, per your example. Fortdj33 (talk) 22:52, 28 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

A majority of the production section could be merged. A lot of sections with very little detail.
Perhaps remove the picture of The Rock from the cast section. Or keep his and remove the cast picture. The sizes aren't compatible.

Done. I removed The Rock, and move the cast picture to the Casting section, as to not break up the Cast list.

Needs a few more pictures.

Added a picture from the toyline in the Promotion section. Fortdj33 (talk) 23:21, 28 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Pass keep it ship shape, and don't forget to keep improving it. Rusted AutoParts 00:47, 29 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]