Talk:Extra Texture (Read All About It)/GA1

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Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin (talk · contribs) 15:33, 16 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
    Why was the tour controversial? Maybe it was just poorly received?
     Done yeepsi (Time for a chat?) 19:17, 20 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    "last-ever" - overmphasized, just "last"
     Done yeepsi (Time for a chat?) 19:17, 20 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    "It is considered to be Harrison's soul album, " - Confusing. Reword it.
     Done But I think, I may have made it more confusing(?) yeepsi (Time for a chat?) 19:17, 20 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    Yes. How about "Featuring elements of soul music and demonstrating... , the album was something..."--GoPTCN 09:10, 21 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    Sounds good. Added. yeepsi (Time for a chat?) 09:56, 21 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    "hit single in the song "You"," - in the song? Maybe "it produced the moderate hit single, "You"". Also how can it be both moderate and a hit single?
    Would "it produced the moderately hit single" work? yeepsi (Time for a chat?) 19:17, 20 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    Better--GoPTCN 09:10, 21 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
     Done yeepsi (Time for a chat?) 09:56, 21 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    Why does Forum links to a city?
     Done "Forum shows, in Los Angeles". yeepsi (Time for a chat?) 19:17, 20 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    "(from Horn)" - Horn is a band?
     Done Jim Horn. Session musician. yeepsi (Time for a chat?) 19:17, 20 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    The article has too many overemphasized language, eg "last-ever", can be just last
     Done Fixed. yeepsi (Time for a chat?) 19:17, 20 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall: Just a few small issues.--GoPTCN 18:44, 20 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    Pass/Fail:
  • Pass Great article! :)--GoPTCN 09:59, 21 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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