Talk:Eli Manning/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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I'll start things off with a reference check. The following links need fixing, upon completion of this I'll proceed further:

Ref #1 (nflplayers.com) is dead.
Ref #30 (manning's shoulder) is dead.
Ref #39 (giants dominate niners) is dead.
Ref #61 (grounded eli) is dead.
Ref #80 (Reebok) is dead.
Ref #93 (cricket tournament) is dead.
Ref #64 (AP 9/14) needs to be fixed.
The following refs changed urls, update them to avoid future redlinks: 32 (giants stun redskins), 34 (umenyiora), 36 (giants rally), 41 (giants outlast dolphins), 57 (can't miss play), and 87 (president bush).
The following refs are not properly formatted on-wiki or are missing information: 84 (NFL draft), 85 (national award), 92 (andrew mcgrew)

I'll give you a week on this stuff. Upon completion I'll review the article in full. Hopefully this is the bulk of the problems. Wizardman 00:33, 2 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Here's more I found:

There's not much personal life wise. Being a Manning, it should be easy to find early life info and the like.
Nothing in college is cited until the Senior Bowl note.
2004 NFL Draft is uncited.
Personal life section should be prosified or meshed in with the article.
2008 playoffs are uncited.
The 2007 season is formatted a lot differently than the other ones, and kinda throws me off.
His playing in the 2004 season isn't discussed at all.

This is all fixable, yet upon conclusion of doing so, I think it would need to go through another GA nomination to find things I likely missed. As a result, I'm going to fail this. It's a nice article, but doesn't meet the criteria yet. Wizardman 17:10, 5 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]