Talk:Claire Lacombe

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The tone and the content of this article are very problematic...[edit]

I don't have the technical editing knowledge to tag or fix it, but this article is not of very high quality and could use some major cleanup. Sentences like "This probably had an influence in her decision to quit the company to become a revolutionary." (uncited) don't sound very professional and seem to be speculative, and sections like "Lacombe tried to defend herself, but it was too late; although she was only briefly detained, the seed of distrust had been planted in the minds of the revolution’s leaders. The Society tried in vain to continue to petition the Convention," don't present Lacombe's biography very professionally. Also, there's an inaccurate link to "Chaumette." I wish I knew how to mark this article but obviously it's due for some major revision. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 72.33.2.50 (talk) 05:53, 26 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]