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The article "the"[edit]

I kindly suggest that this page be moved to Battle of Muar, per WP:NAME. __earth ^(Talk) 13:27, 1 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Plagiarism[edit]

I don't know how to 'flag' this, but the section 'the ambush' has parts lifted verbatim and without attribution from Frank Owen's "The Fall of Singapore." I suspect you will need to rewrite this plagiarized section; as it stands it is not an original contribution. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.226.19.84 (talk) 14:49, 6 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for pointing that out. __earth ^(Talk) 15:20, 6 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

This is a well written article. I am a Malaysian and most Malaysians only barely know about the major battles in Malaya during WWII. The photographs accompanying this article are excellent and are attention grabbers. Good work to whoever you are. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 130.217.76.77 (talk) 23:41, 23 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]

NPOV[edit]

Dunno how to fix it, but the Japanese War Crimes section, particularly the first sentence, is WAY POV. I mean, "bestial savagery"? "massacre"? Let the facts speak for themselves, et. al.66.215.20.28 (talk) 05:24, 31 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]