Talk:2008 Sichuan riots
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Arrests[edit]
Hi. There are what seem to be typos in the section, and definitely contradictory info. I checked the RS, then made corrections per RS. For some reason @Albertaont the corrections were reverted with a note about "synthesis" [1] which isn't clear. Possibly, if the RS is reviewed, the edits wouldn't be misunderstood. Please give a ping. Thanks. Pasdecomplot (talk) 11:24, 15 October 2020 (UTC)
Subsection suggestion[edit]
It seems the sections need improvement: If the text followed a dateline, the info would be more comprehensible; 'Events' could be the only section, with geographic subsections if necessary. Thoughts? Thanks. Pasdecomplot (talk) 12:58, 15 October 2020 (UTC)
- Also, it appears that a same location of events described in opening is repeatedly reported from different RS using different place name ie. Western Tibet v Aba v Ngaba v Garzi etc...
- If so, nuns and other people were also there, not only monks. A geographic check also seems in order. Pasdecomplot (talk) 14:48, 15 October 2020 (UTC)