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CCI[edit]

There are no copying within templates on article talk, and no public domain attributions in the article, so these will need to be checked per Wikipedia:Contributor copyright investigations/WikiProject Tropical cyclones SandyGeorgia (Talk) 05:05, 2 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Version before article went to FAC. The only individual article that existed when this article went to FAC was Hurricane Marty (2003).

To check[edit]

User:Nilfanion added bulk of storm info; ran Earwig comparing archive.org sources with diffs as text added on four instances, and found no problem. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 05:29, 2 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

User:Tom added storm info on hurricanes that did not yet have articles, and I could not find any indication of copyvio. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 06:07, 2 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Copying within Wikipedia pre-FAC[edit]

2004 Pacific hurricane season

01:31, May 19, 2005 came from 2004 Pacific hurricane season (present on 23:06, May 15, 2005).
Note: 01:42, May 19, 2005 edit summary: "forgot to change names"
01:42, May 19, 2005 came from 2004 Pacific hurricane season (present on 23:06, May 15, 2005)

SandyGeorgia (Talk) 05:29, 2 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

The first one is fine, does not need attribution IMHO; formatting and such is common between all articles. The names are too simple for copyright even. I have fixed the second one with a null edit with attribution (I usually do cosmetic things like spaces, fixing a typo, or using convert templatees) to the article where content was pasted to, and then placed attribution templates on both talk pages. Sennecaster (Chat) 18:43, 2 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
See this for attribution, and this for the talk page template. Sennecaster (Chat) 18:48, 2 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks, Sennecaster. I did this and this. Next, I will do each of the individual articles. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 00:03, 3 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I believe all of the Copied templates and attribution edits are now done, but we still need to check on public domain attribution here (described lower on this talk page). SandyGeorgia (Talk) 00:30, 3 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hurricane Marty (2003)

Marty's content was added here on 19:17, August 9, 2006. Marty at that point was this, 20:27, July 19, 2006. There is very minor copying within. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 06:07, 2 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Added CWW template: [1] SandyGeorgia (Talk) 17:15, 13 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Copying within while at FAR[edit]

Last version before article came to FAR, 10:55, July 10, 2021

The hurricane sub-articles are:

Copied templates to check[edit]

Added earlier Marty CWW: [2] SandyGeorgia (Talk) 17:16, 13 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Too-close paraphrasing[edit]

Patricia rewrite, very minor instance of too-close paraphrasing here ("westerly shear over Patricia, which caused the low-level center to become displaced") that should be corrected in the article. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 07:14, 2 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Attributed NOAA Pd-domain: [3] SandyGeorgia (Talk) 16:59, 13 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Overall[edit]

Some instance of too-close paraphrasing or plagiarism that should be examined:

SandyGeorgia (Talk) 07:29, 2 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Article: Later on October 24 , the system turned toward the northwest in response to a weakness in the ridge caused by the trough near the Baja California Peninsula.
Source: [4] Later on 24 October, Patricia turned toward the northwest in response to a weakness in the ridge caused by the trough near Baja California.
Inserted here. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 07:59, 2 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
From here, public domain, but without a PD attribution tag on the source or the article. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 08:01, 2 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Attributed to NOAA Pd-notice: [5] SandyGeorgia (Talk) 16:54, 13 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Earwig on the version before the article came to FAR, July 10 2021

https://copyvios.toolforge.org/?lang=en&project=wikipedia&title=&oldid=1032905919&action=search&use_engine=1&use_links=1&turnitin=0

reveals nothing major. So the problematic instances crept in during the FAR. I am too tired to look up the rest, but there is one sample above. Public domain can be attributed, but I don't know which template to add where, and we would need to go back and look at everything new (I was looking more at the original FAC). SandyGeorgia (Talk) 08:11, 2 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Summary[edit]

Moneytrees I would appreciate some help in wrapping this one up. If I have done all of this correctly, I feel confident to move forward on checking other cyclone/hurricane FAs.

I found copying within, both old and new, going both ways, and believe I have now added the correct templates to the suite of articles (see above).

I found some instances of public domain use (NOAA) during the FAR, and have attributed it. [6]

But I don’t know what to do with these, which I have determined happened during this FAR (see above), which is still open. If these sources are public domain, I need to know how I determine that so I can attribute. If they are not public domain, we have a bigger problem, as these are recent introductions:

Please advise, SandyGeorgia (Talk) 17:23, 13 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@SandyGeorgia: First source is copyrighted but is timing out so I'll blame school wifi. Second one is no concern of copyvio. Sennecaster (Chat) 18:49, 14 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Still stalled in getting an answer on one remaining copyright issue. Because Earwig times out, switching to Dupdet tool.

That journal claims copyright but the summaries at the specific article come from the NOAA, which is public domain, and a sample source for one of the duplicated insertions (Patricia) is this NOAA source public domain NOAA.

So, if I am understanding correctly, I need to check all the insertions identified in the DupDet tool and add a {{Pd-notice}}

SandyGeorgia (Talk) 16:34, 20 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Done, [22] SandyGeorgia (Talk) 16:45, 20 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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