Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Assessment/SMS Posen

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Promoted EyeSerene^talk 10:29, 9 June 2010 (UTC)

SMS Posen

Nominator(s): Parsecboy (talk)

• Featured article candidates/SMS Posen/archive1

Yet another German battleship, this one was one of the first dreadnoughts. This article passed GA last week, and I feel that it is pretty comprehensive. I appreciate any and all comments directed at improving the article, towards an eventual run at FAC (that means hack and slash all you want, Dank). Parsecboy (talk) 15:11, 2 June 2010 (UTC)

• Comment: just a quick look at the moment (sorry, its late here):
  • no dab links, no ext links to play up (no action required);
  • images seem appropriately licenced (no action required);
  • the infobox image could have alt text added to it given that the other photo has it;
  • in the Citations subsection, citation # 6 has "Gardiner and Gray" while citation # 37 has "Gardiner & Gray" (these should be consistent);
  • some of the ISBNs have hyphens while others don't. — AustralianRupert (talk) 14:06, 4 June 2010 (UTC)
    • Thanks for checking the technical/refs stuff. I added alt text and fixed the two issues you pointed out with the references. Parsecboy (talk) 14:23, 5 June 2010 (UTC)
• Support: all my concerns have been addressed. — AustralianRupert (talk) 07:30, 7 June 2010 (UTC)
• Support with a couple comments
  • What happened to the cool note you used to use to tell readers what "SMS" means?
  • A couple grammar issues, but Dank's probable copyedit will take care of those. If not, I'll go through and attempt a copyedit myself. The content looks good to me. —Ed (talk • majestic titan) 06:56, 6 June 2010 (UTC)
    • I think it was the Helgoland ACR where Dank came up with the current solution. And Dank is going to be doing a copy-edit sometime soon. Thanks for making the fixes you did. Parsecboy (talk) 11:16, 6 June 2010 (UTC)
• Support - another phenomenal German dreadnought article. Cam ^(Chat) 03:47, 9 June 2010 (UTC)

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