Wikipedia:WikiProject India/Peer review/Mangalore

Mangalore

This article has been drastically improved and meets most of the standards of Wikipedia. A peer review is required on this article. All are requested to participate.-->>Kensplanet (talk) 07:13, 6 March 2008 (UTC)

I have gone thru the article:-

• The economy para has lots of nonsense. plz remove nonsense. write a economy in mangalore article and put all details there. here keep only key details.....write only a single para
• similarly for civic admin
• put lang & rel in demography and merge cuisine with culture
• transport is too big . plz reduce. write a whole section without subdiivisions/ only key points. write a article transport in mlr and put all details thereWpinman (talk) 14:22, 17 March 2008 (UTC)

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I have gone thru the article:-

• The economy para has lots of nonsense. plz remove nonsense. write a economy in mangalore article and put all details there. here keep only key details.....write only a single para
• Done. Economy section reduced. Main article has been put up there.-------Kensplanet (talk) 14:27, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
• similarly for civic admin

-Done. Trivia from this section deleted.-------Kensplanet (talk) 14:27, 18 March 2008 (UTC)

• put lang & rel in demography and merge cuisine with culture
• Comment. No, Language and Religion cannot be put under Demographics. Demographics is reserves for only those points for which numbers (figures) can be provided. But Cuisine will be merged with Culture.-------Kensplanet (talk) 14:55, 17 March 2008 (UTC)
• transport is too big . plz reduce. write a whole section without subdiivisions/ only key points. write a article transport in mlr and put all details there
• Done. Innecessary info deleted-------Kensplanet (talk) 14:27, 18 March 2008 (UTC)

Wpinman (talk) 14:22, 17 March 2008 (UTC)