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Platoon (film)[edit]

This article is a real mess and needs major work but I would certainly be willing to work with someone to clean it up and make it worthy of GA status. Any comments, suggestions, etc. would be very helpful. Thanks. --J.D. 20:15, 25 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Belovedfreak[edit]

  • The lead needs expanding per WP:LEAD.
  • Plot needs cutting down considerably, it's far too long at the moment.
  • The section on production could do with expanding if possible, and needs citations.
  • All the "citation needed" tags need to be addressed.
  • The reception section could maybe be expanded with more about what film critics thought. I would also consider turning the awards section into prose.
  • There needs to be a list of references / footnotes at the end of the article.

--Belovedfreak 13:08, 26 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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