Wikipedia:Peer review/The Incredibles/archive1

The Incredibles[edit]

I feel this article could be of Good Article or Feature Article quality if improved. I'm not an expert in what makes a Feature Article, so I've asked for this review so we know the best way to improve it. RMS Oceanic 18:58, 18 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Cut the plot to under 700 words.
Create a production section.
Axe trivia.
References need author, title, publisher, date etc.

Alientraveller 20:59, 31 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I condensed the synopsis, but it needs more. Goldfritha 00:15, 11 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Also, some of the trivia is -- not trivia. Work it into text. Goldfritha 00:15, 11 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]