Wikipedia:Peer review/Stairway to Heaven/archive1

Stairway to Heaven[edit]

I would like to know what you guys think of this article. I know it is not ready to be featured by this is my first time trying to get an article featured so I don't know what needs to be fixed. Any comments would help. Dan M 00:23, 30 November 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Opening sentence should be more professional, than simply "a famous song", and include a year, writer, etc Sherurcij 03:46, 30 November 2005 (UTC)[reply]

The lead definitely needs to be expanded. D e nni ☯ 04:05, 30 November 2005 (UTC)[reply]

I'm increasing the lead by moving up the first few lines from the history section. However, I do not know where to put this:

It did, however, appear as a promotional disc in the United States, on an Australian acoustic EP, and in the 1990s as a 20th anniversary promo issue.

It doesn't fit with either the lead or the History section now. I'm leaving it in the lead, but it can't stay.

From the article: This form would influence many other rock artists, notably Queen, who would use a similar structure for their opus "Bohemian Rhapsody". Needs a citation showing Queen was definitely influenced by Stairway.
Needs an iconic picture of Page playing the two necked guitar. Article is lacking without it.
"Our turntables only play in one direction—forwards" Great Quote, would love a citation.

My name is No Parking and I approved this message. 14:48, 30 November 2005 (UTC)[reply]