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Oscar Robertson[edit]

Hi, this is the article of NBA great Oscar Robertson. I have just majorly rewritten it as of WP:WIAGA, so I lack a bit of distance to my work. However, I would like to shape it into a GA and perhaps eventually a FA, and ask for your help :D So, general questions:

  • Compelling prose?
  • Formally right?
  • Accessible enough for non-experts, yet not too verbose for experts?

Thanks for reading, Onomatopoeia 11:32, 31 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I gave a little copyedit, and altered some wording in it. Looks very good I can't really recommend anything else because if I saw anything I objected to I changed it myself. Quadzilla99 19:16, 31 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]
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