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Loïc Le Meur[edit]

Some language in the article is very biased and/or is missing references. Maybe someone who is French or is living in France can contribute. --Heikoh 23:57, 18 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

CloudNine[edit]

  • First of all, there's no need to bold sentences in Controversies. It makes the article more awkward to read.
  • Career needs expansion; there are several one line paragraphs.
  • Could you possibly find a free image of the person? He is a public personality after all.
  • Fix the citation needed or dubious tags, or remove the information altogether.
  • EMEA may not be immediately obvious to readers; why not expand the acronym?
  • How did Le Meur announce his support? You might want to add a translated comment.
  • There's little about his personal life. Where was he born?

That should be enough for now :) CloudNine 18:06, 11 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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