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List of Dead Like Me episodes

• A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for June 2009.

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I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to get feedback on how to improve the article (what to change/remove/add) if needed to get on the featured articles list.

Thanks, Dmarex (talk) 16:31, 18 June 2009 (UTC)

• Comment: Is this a list or an article? At the moment it is somewhere in between. Is there any useful information in this list that is not already covered at {http://www.deadlikeme.tv/DeadGirlWalking.php }? Why can't this be summarized and merged into Dead Like Me? Jezhotwells (talk) 13:02, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

• Comments from Cryptic C62:
  • What's going on with the numbering system in the tables? The series/season # thing is really confusing. The two terms are synonymous in British English.
  • The episode summaries are written with an WP:INUNIVERSE style, which is bad.
  • The third paragraph of the lead is difficult to read due to the massive number of wikilinks. I suggest cutting out the bit that lists all of the characters/actors.
• Not watchlisting. Talk me if you have questions. --Cryptic C62 · Talk 14:22, 30 June 2009 (UTC)