Wikipedia:Peer review/Howie Day/archive1

Howie Day[edit]

After doing obscene amounts of work on this article to improve it from the mess it had been, the article has recently been passed as a Good Article. Call me a masochist, but I'd really like to try and get it up to Featured Article status (or as close as possible) and so I request any comments and input from the community. One issue I'm conscious of is the need for better use of images in the main text, and I'm trying to source appropriately licensed photographs of Howie (particularly those of live performances) to fill that particular void. Any help would be very appreciated! Idp 21:52, 18 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Several minor issues: The web references at the bottom seem to have a lot of extraneous "]"s, which should be cleared up. Per WP:CONTEXT and WP:MOSDATE, decades and years without full dates generally should not be linked, though dates should be linked. Dates and years need 0 or 2 commas (please stay consistent, for example: In November 28, 2006 this that happened -> In November 28, 2006, this that happened) Finally, as is done in WP:FOOTNOTE, the inline citations generally appear after the punctuation mark, without a space in between. Thanks, AndyZ _t 22:01, 18 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for taking the time to evaluate the page. I've made the changes suggested. Cheers! Idp 00:30, 24 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]