Wikipedia:Peer review/Extreme ironing/archive1

Any advice for this article? -- Zanimum 15:10, 10 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]

A few things come to mind after a read:

The image copyright status needs to be sorted out. Ask for permission for the image to be released under a free license, or seek another image under a free license.
All references to media articles (The Guardian, etc) should be cited.
What are the criticisms of extreme ironing? The article seems weighted towards praising it.
How about more on the Extreme Ironing Bureau and the breakaway Urban Housework. Is this a big rivalry? Also need more general information about the EIB. When did it form?
What is the Rowenta Trophy? Who sponsors it? Why is it important? — WiseKwai 19:30, 10 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR _t 21:00, 10 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, Senators^{Talk | Contribs} 00:36, 11 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]