Wikipedia:Peer review/Ahn Eak-tai/archive1

Ahn Eak-tai

Possible areas of peer review:

• Fluent flow of prose, and smooth transition between paragraphs and topics.
• Additional references, checking factual reliability
• Checking for correct spelling in foreign phrases translated to English, and possible redirects for those phrases. (i.e. Kunitachi Music School)
• Clarification of details, pointing out blurry areas
• Better organization of the sections
• Are the reference & notes done correctly?

(Wikimachine 03:25, 30 November 2006 (UTC))

• Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ _t 22:32, 30 November 2006 (UTC)